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moon lit luna (ipod touch wallpaper) by midnightfox1 moon lit luna (ipod touch wallpaper) by midnightfox1
THIS WAS DRAWN ON MY IPOD TOUCH. i put it in caps cause some ppl dont read the description. well i finally drew something. gosh it has been a while since i submitted anything here. i am going to try to draw more, i had gotten into a funk, but i think i did pretty good on this one.

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Wow. This is just amazing. Especially that you did this on your iPod touch.
I am just so mesmerized by the detail and everything about this photo.
The moon shining details are phenomenal! Even how you drew the stars is just beautiful.
The shading is just perfect. You just knew exactly where the shading belonged, it's just amazing!
Her mane is beautifully drawn and colored. I adore the effect that you did with her mane along with the kinda clear part and the sparkles.
Her eyes are wonderful just, there are no eyelashes; it almost makes her look like a guy. But, I understand why you were to do that on an iPod.
Other than that, this is amazing!
Keep up the good work!
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Nice job. This is quite cute and I'm impressed you can draw so well on one of those touch devices.

I like that you are quite consistent on your lighting. I like your background the blurring of the moon and her dancing on the waters. I like her eye and how it feels like she might cry. It lends the piece sad yet lovely.

Though it may just be a matter of style on this, you should start to see her forelegs a little bit even if it is just shadows. It will make it more clear as to what it is. I thought at first it was Luna as a Lapras (silly me).

Now a much bigger issue is the brightness of that moon. Yes the moon is bright and yes it is pretty white, but it feels too bright especially for this piece. It actually huts my eyes a bit. While I love that you included the moon and the reflection off the water I suggest turning down the brightness to a light to medium grey. Especially with the effects you have on it it is extremely bright and makes me feel like I'm looking at Sirius more than the Moon. Turning it down would make it easier on the eyes.

Nicely done,

Inciatus~
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MudslingerArtist Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013   Digital Artist
The title has a ring to it
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midnightfox1 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank u very much
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MudslingerArtist Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013   Digital Artist
No problem!
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SirReverb Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
remarkable job, I especially like the backround :D
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midnightfox1 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much
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Cjbronyten Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
This is really well done I love Luna
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midnightfox1 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much
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Cjbronyten Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
Your welcome
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MagicaITrevor Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
... Wow... Who knew that pictures could be drawn on the ipod touch?! O_o It's amazing...
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midnightfox1 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much. Surprises me that so few ppl commented or looked at it.
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Fancymareinblue Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!
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midnightfox1 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much
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Lazyboierick Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
Very nice,Though I wish I had an Ipod touch now :I
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midnightfox1 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you very much. it would probably work for some phones too.
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Lazyboierick Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
Thats a problem for me also...No phones :I
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midnightfox1 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No idea then
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midnightfox1 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
everyone makes me jealous too. alot of artists have that. and thank you very much.
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midnightfox1 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
because i want to be better and faster. it takes me a long time to make stuff like this. drawing is a practice. u have to give to get.
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midnightfox1 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i now how that is. i hadnt drawn in a month at least before i did this. other than some crappy sketches.
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midnightfox1 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh I will and thank you
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FiMStargazer Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice, looks great!
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midnightfox1 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you very much.
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FiMStargazer Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The only small Critique I could say is the head is a tad small. But over all it's pretty awesome!
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midnightfox1 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you hit the button to reply to yourself. that does not notify me. lucky i was on this page and noticed.

it is a learning process i kind of like it this way. dont know if it is part of my still or what but thank you fur the feedback.
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FiMStargazer Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I tend to realize things I want to say after I original post then regret that dA has no way to edit earlier comments. It's kind of a force of habbit.
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midnightfox1 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Some ppl will not notice if u do that. I did because I went to the deviations page
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